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(George and Izzie run out of the closet. They stop abruptly when they look down at the lobby and see dozens of people on the floor, men in black suits with guns strapped to their hands, and Meredith with a gun pointed to her head)
Izzie (whispers): Oh my...
(George pulls down on Izzie's hand, and the two slowly lay down on the cold floor.)

(Down in the lobby Meredith is squeezing her eyes shut, hoping this is all a dream. Man #1 has her hands behind her back and is pushing the gun into her temple.)
Mer (whispering): Please, please, just..
Man #1: You shut the hell up. If you make another peep everyone in this hospital is going to die. Do you under stand me.
(Meredith presses her lips together and nods, her hands shaking.)
Man #1 (to everyone in the lobby): NOW YOU LISTEN TO ME! SOMETHING WAS SUPPOSE TO BE DONE THIS MORNING, APPARANTLEY IT WASNT A SUCCESS. NOW ALL OF YOU ARE GOING TO BE PAYING FOR IT!
(Izzie shuts her eyes, George squeezes her hand)
Man #1: WHERE IS THE CHIEF OF THIS HOSPITAL.
(Everyone is silent.) The man squeezes meredith's arms and whispers to her: Where is he?!
Mer: I-I don't know what your talking about
Man #1: You better tell me or I swear I will pull this triger
(Meredith begins to cry but shakes her head no)


(the men are pointing guns at everyone around the room)
Man #2: IF ANY OF YOU TAKE OUT CELL PHONES OR ANY OTHER FORM OF CONTACT YOU WILL BE SHOT!
Mer: Please, just leave them alone, they didn't do anything!
(the man pushes the gun harder to her head)
Man #1: What did I tell you about keeping your mouth shut?
Mer: I don't care.
Man #1: WHAT?!
Mer: I DON'T CARE! DO NOT HURT ANY ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE!
Man #1: Would you rather me hurt you?
Mer (pauses): No. But I'd rather me then all of these people
Man #1 (smiles): You got a boyfriend, big-mouth?
Mer: What? uh-no.
Man #1: What's his name?
Mer: I don't have one!
Man #1: Then who the hell are you trying to protect
(Meredith stares at the man, then turns away without saying anything)


(Derek knocks on the chief's door)
Der: Chief? You wanted to see me?
Chief: Derek, the hospital is on total lockdown!
Der: What?!
Chief: We have patients, interns, residents, attendings all being held hostage!
Der: Where?
Chief: The lobby in the West Wing.
Der: Who's down there?!
Chief: I have no clue. All I know is that a women has a gun to her head. That's it.
Der: What should we do?
Chief: There's nothing to do Derek! If we go down there, we get shot. If we stay up here, other people could get shot!
Der: What do they want?!
Chief: I have no clue!
Der (pauses): Where's Meredith?
Chief (looks up): I don't know where anybody is...
Der: Is she down there?!
Chief: I don't know!
Der: DAMMIT RICHARD WHAT IF SHE'S DOWN THERE!!
Chief: Derek, please, calm down, now is NOT the time to freak out!
Der: I'm going down there...
Chief: DEREK! THEY COULD KILL YOU!
Der: I don't care
(derek runs off, the chief rubs his eyes)


(Alex is running off, Annie stops him)
Annie: Alex?! Where are you going?
Alex: The hospital is on lockdown
Annie: WHAT?!
Alex: My mom-what if my mom is down there?!
Annie: Alex calm down!
Alex: She-she could be down there!
Annie: Alex!
Alex: I'm going...
Annie: NO! That's crazy! You could die!
Alex: So could my mom...
Annie: ALEX, NO!
(Alex goes up to Annie and kisses her)
Alex: Don't worry, I'll be back...
Annie: AND IF YOUR NOT?!
(Alex shakes his head and runs off, Annie puts her hands on her head)


(Izzie is shaking as she is lying down next to George. Did she do all this? Could hundreds of people die because of HER?!)
George (whispers): Shh, don't worry, everything is gonna be fine.
Izzie: OH yeah, it looks like its gonna be SUPER fine!
George: Izzie...
Izzie: GEORGE! We could die! Everyone could die! It's not fine! Just be quiet so you don't get us both into trouble...


(Derek ducks and slowly walks down the stairs, Alex comes up next to him)
Der: Are you okay?
Alex: my mom might be down there.
Der: Have you seen meredith?
(Alex looks at Derek then shakes his head. The 2 continue to go down the stairs when they see Meredith has the gun pointed to her head)
Der: Oh my God!
(All of a sudden, Man #3 grabs Derek and Alex and brings them to Man #1.)
Man #3: Found these two hiding in the stairs.
Mer: DEREK?!?!
Man #1: You know him?
Mer: Uh-no.
Man #1: Yeah, you do, and if you continue lying I will shoot you.
Mer: I don't know him!
Man #1: What did you say? (he loads his gun) (Meredith is silent) WHAT DID YOU SAY?!
Derek: You son of a bitch (he charges at the man. The man takes his gun and shoots Derek in the stomach. He falls down, and appears dead)
Mer:OH MY GOD!!! (Meredith starts hitting the man, crying and shaking as she does it) YOU SHOULD ROT IN HELL!!!! DEREK, NOO!!!!!!
Man #1: Get her off of me!
(The 2 other men take her off of him, and throw her in a closet. Meanwhile, Alex runs up to see if Derek is alright when they point a gun at him. The cheif is trying desperatley to get Callie's heart to beat again. George and Izzie watch in horror as Derek lies on the floor. Is he dead?)




EPISODE 9
"If Everyone Cared"


Mer V.O: Death. It's inevitable. that one moment changes our lives forever. We lose who we are. And when that happens, we have no clue what to do

(Meredith is banging on the closet door, crying)
Mer: LET ME OUT!!!!! PLEASE, LET ME OUT!!! (she puts her hands on her hand and starts crying hysterically. She slides down teh door and exhales deeply. How did this happen?)


(The chief is trying desperatley to revive Callie)
Chief: Charge to 300!!! DAMNIT! No change, come on Callie, come on
Nurse: Blood test are in, she had an over-dose of drugs.
(the chief stops)
Chief: What?
Nurse: The only logical explanations are that her care-keeper gave her the wrong dosage, or...
Chief: Or what?
Nurse: Or she tried to kill herself
Chief (pauses): LET'S GO PEOPLE!!!! Start the compresstions!!!


(the 3 men are in the corner talking. Alex is standing over Derek. He knows that if he stays here he will bleed out. Alex had to get him into surgery. But how?)
Alex: HE'S BLEEDING OUT! HE'S GOING TO DIE IF WE DON'T OPERATE ON HIM!
Man #1: Do you think we care?
Alex: How can you be so-people love him! He has a mom, a dad, sisters, a girlfriend...people need him. How would you feel if that was you?!
Man #2: Sorry Dr. Phill but it's not.
Man #1: WAIT! We'll save your precious friend if you do one thing for us.
Alex: What?
Man #1: Kill the man in room 2345. His name is lawrence O'cannon.
Alex: Why do you want him killed anyway?
Man #1: That's none of your buisness smart guy. If you want him to live, you better do it.
Alex: And if I don't
Man #1: He'll die


(Izzie is watching Alex and Derek from the balcony, her face is white. She did this. If she just killed the man, none of this would be happening. She hated herself.)
Izzie (whispers to george): I did this...I should be the one down there, not them. It's my fault.
George: izzie, izzie look at me (lifts her face up by her chin) None of this is your fault. You didn't do anything. It's the men. It's there fault. YOU didn't do anything. (Izzie rests her head on George's shoulder and sobs. George hugs Izzie, wondering when he will be able to leave. And wondering when he will be able to see Callie.)


(Meredith is shaking in the closet, how did this happen? Suddenly, she hears someone banging on the door)
Cristina: Meredith!!! You in there?
Mer: Cristina?
Cristina: Hold on, I'll get you out!
(Cristina struggles then opens the door. She runs up to Meredith and hugs her)
Mer: How did you find me?
Cristina: I heard you banging, then I grabbed the key in the chief's office.
Mer: How did you get past the men?
Cristina: I crawled.
(Meredith smiled at the thought of her crawling, but she frowned immediatley after. Derek might be dying! She started crying hysterically at the thought.)
Crisinta: I know, he'll be fine.
Mer: How-How do you know?
(Crisitna hugs Mer)
Cristina: Shhh it'll be fine
(Mer holds onto cristina, crying hysterically and praying that Derek is okay)



(Alex walked down the hall. He just stared ahead. He had to kill this man or else Derek would die, and he cared about Meredith too much to let that happen, Annie ran up to him)
Annie: OH MY GOD YOU'RE ALRIGHT! THANK GOD! (she wrapped her arms around him)
(Alex pulls her off of him and keeps on walking)
Annie: ALEX?! What has happened to you?!
(Alex closes his eyes then slowly walks into the room and shuts the door. Everything is quiet, and the only sound is the heart monitor. He walks over to the person he has to kill and stops. He's about 40 years old and is asleep. Alex shakes his head, he CAN'T kill this man! But, in the back of his mind, he knows derek is lying on the ground, bleeding to death...)


(The chief is out of breathe trying to revive Callie. Mark runs in)
Mark: Oh my God-
Chief: SLOAN! Come over here and continue with the compressions!
Mark: What happened?!
Chief: I talked to the nurse, she gave her the correct dosage...
(Mark stops)
Mark: She tried to commit suicide?
Chief: I-I think so
(Mark shakes his head then continues with the compressions)
Chief: where's O'mally?
Mark: Hostage
Chief: Dammit! I should be down there...
Mark: You can't, your the chief you need to be down there!
Chief: What if someone gets hurt! I'd never be able to forgive myself...
Mark: Chief, I don't think anyone is hurt. Just keep breathing, we'll get through this.
(The chief looks at mark then continues to revive callie)


(Meredith is crawling with Cristina, she needs to see if Derek is okay.)
Mer: Cristina, what if he's-
Cristina: He's not dead Meredith.
Mer: I-I can't do this
(Meredith stops)
Cristina: MEREDITH! The love of your life is bleeding out, you can do this!
Mer: NO, no I can't (starts crying) Go-Go on without me!
Cristina: meredith!
Mer: GO!
(Cristina squeezes Meredith's hand and continues crawling. Meredith puts her hands on her head and cries)


(George is watching in horror as Derek lies on the floor. He can't just sit here and watch him die. He slowly gets up)
Izzie: GEORGE?!?
Man 1: HEY YOU! GET DOWN!
George (pauses): NO!
Man 1: What did you say?
George: I SAID NO!
(The man pulls out his gun and aims it at george)
Man 1: Get down or I'll shoot you!
George: LET THAT MAN BE TREATED!
Man 1: WHAT DID I JUST SAY!?!
George: GO AHEAD SHOOT ME!
(The man pulls his triger. George ducks and is relieved he didn't get hit with the bullot. He turns around and sees Izzie-lying on the floor, cringing, with blood pouring out of her abdomen.)


(Cristina stops at the side of the wall. She takes a deep breathe, and continues to crawl.)
Man 2: HEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
(Cristina freezes)
Man 1: (walks up to her): Well, well, well, you guys just can't sit still can you?!
Cristina: I, I want to help you
Man 1: What?
Man 2: She's lying boss
Man 1: Shut up Lenny...you were saying?
Cristina: That man you sent up to kill the guy, he's not going to do it.
Man 1: How do you know?
Cristina: He's uh, sensitive
Man 1: So he won't do it?
Cristina: I'll go up there and do it!
Man 2: BOSS! DON'T TRUST HER!
Man 1: SHUT UP! (he puts the gun up to man 2's head.)
Man 2: uhhh, sorry boss
Man 1: You-go!
(Cristina runs off)
Man 1: BUT IF YOU SO MUCH AS TALK TO ANOTHER SOUL, EVERYONE WILL BE DEAD!
(Cristina nods and continues to walk up the stairs)


(George is trying everything to stop the bleeding for Izzie, he looks down and sees Derek is almost dead.)
George: DAMMIT ISOBEL STEVENS YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DIE!! DAMMIT!!!
Izzie: G-g-geeeeo-rge, i'mmm sorrry
George: Don't talk! shhh, don't talk!
(George rips off part of his shirt and covers the bleeding. He needs to get her to an OR quick or she'll die)

(Meredith slowly looks to see if Derek is okay. She stops. If he wasn't dead, he was going to die in a matter of minutes. Cristina was right, she couldn't just sit here. She lied on the ground and pretended she was just another hostage. Whenever they werent looking, she would inch up a little bit. She prayed that this would work!)


(Sean walks into the hospital.)
Sean: Hey, is he dead?
Man 1: We don't know
Sean: DAMMIT DOMINIC I TOLD YOU I WANTED HIM DEAD!
Man 1: Take it easy boss, he'll be dead.
(George looks up and sees Sean. He freezes.)
Sean: Okay,so i see you've shot someone.
(He looks down at derek)
George: TWO PEOPLE ACTUALLY!
Man 1: This guy wont shut up!
Sean: And who would that be?
George: Izzie Stevens
(sean stops)
Sean: Wow. What a shame...
George: YOU DON'T EVEN WANT TO HELP HER?!
Sean: No. I don't. She screwed me over.
George: What are you talking about.
Sean: We were getting married, when I found her screwing her previous manager before me. And guess what? She only did it to get ahead. She was going to dump me as a boyfriend and a manager...bith! So, this is payback!
George: Then why do you want to kill that man?!
Sean: He's the manager she was going to dump me for! Karma sucks!
George: This happened over 10 years ago! Why do you want payback NOW?!
Sean: Why are you asking so many questions?
George: BECAUSE MY BEST FRIEND IS DYING!
Sean: Again, karma sucks!


(Alex was sweating, he had no idea what he was doing, cristina walked in.)
Alex: Cristina?
Crisitna: How you doing?
Alex: I-I can't do this!
Cristina: I know.
Alex: Wait how did you-
Cristina: I have my ways
(Alex smiled but then immediatley frowned.)
Alex: Derek...
Cristina: He's not doing so well
Alex: (pauses) What if we lied
Cristina: What?!
Alex: What if we said that we killed the guy, to let derek have help.
Crisitna: Alex they wont...
Alex: It's worth a shot
Cristina: (hesitates) Okay, for meredith.
Alex: For Meredith...



(Cristina and Alex walk up to the 3 men, both very nervous)
Cristina: We killed him
Man 1: You did?
Alex: Yes, we did, now can we take this man to surgery?!
(Sean comes out)
Sean: Well, well, well...you finally killed him did you?
Alex: Yeah...
Sean: Dominic, check. If he's not dead, kill them
(Cristina and Alex look at each other. Cristina spots Meredith and panics.)
Cristina: LOOK, PLEASE, THIS MAN IS ALMOST DEAD, PLEASE!!!
Sean: Too bad I don't care...
(Alex charges at Sean, Man 2 and Man 3 rush to pull alex off. man 2 loses his gun, cristina grabs it and it goes off. Everything is silent. She killed Sean.)



(Cristina holds the gun up to Man 2 and Man 3)
Cristina (whispering): Alex, get Derek to an OR, I'll hold them up here
(Alex grabs Derek and carries him out of the lobby)
Cristina: YOU TWO DON'T MOVE!
George: CRISTINA!
(Cristina turns around)
Cristina: George?
George: It's Izzie, she's been shot!
Cristina: oh my God! Take her to an OR, find the chief, anyone that can help!
(George picks Izzie up and goes off to an OR)
Man 3: I still have my gun princess.
Cristina: Yeah...well, I'll shoot you if you come any closer
(Meredith creeps up behind Man 3 and knocks a chair over his head.)
Man 2: Holy-
Cristina(out of breathe): YOU BE QUIET!
(Meredith hugs Cristina and starts crying)
Mer: Thank you
(Cristina pulls Mer closer, still aiming the gun on Man 2)




(Man 1 comes down with his gun)
Man 1: YOU TWO DIDN'T KILL HIM! (he stands still when he sees sean lying on the floor dead.) Boss? Hey, where is that other guy?
Man 2: They shot him, and they took the guy to an OR.
(Man 1 is shocked but continues to aim his gun at Cristina and Meredith)
Man 1: And they are holding you hostage?
Man 2: I, I guess you could say that. They took my gun away.
Man 1: Well, I'll be damned.
Cristina: We'll shoot you too if you don't put that gun away!
Man 1: I'm not-
Man 2: They'll do it Dominic! They killed Sean right in front of my eyes. They'll do it.
(Man 1 hesitantley puts his gun down. Meredith runs up and takes it away)
Cristina: Now stay like that, I'm calling the police
Man 1: WHAT?!
(Crisitna runs off with Meredith. Man 2 crouches down and looks over at Man 1 who is shaking his head.)



(George is running to see if the chief can help Izzie, he bumps into Olivia)
Olivia: Oh my God George, your okay?!
George: Where's the chief
Olivia: Hes in room 3324, but George-
(George runs off before she has a chance to tell him whos in that room. He runs into the room)
George: Chief, I need- (He stops. He stares at the chief doing the compressions on his wife) Chief?
Chief: MARK, get him out of here!
George: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!
(Mark takes George outside)
George: Let me in there!
Mark: NO, George...No!
George: What the-what happened?
Mark (pauses): Drug over-dose.
George: What...she tried to kill herself?!
(Mark nods then puts his hand on George's shoulder.)
Mark: I'm sorry...
(George kneels down and cries. He doesn't care if Mark sees him acting like a baby.)
George: Mark, go help Izzie Stevens. SHes in OR 1
Mark: What happened?
George: (Wipes away a few tears) She's been shot



(Cristina is operating on Derek, everything seems to be going well.)
Cristina: Alex, can you come over here and hold this clamp in here for me.
(Alex walked over and did what he was told)
Cristina: Geez, he's lost a lot of blood. Do you know his blood type?
Alex: No
Cristina: SHIT! Okay, run down and ask meredith. she's behind the staircase
Alex: What if she doens't know?
Cristina: Then we're screwed


(Mark is trying to operate on Izzie by himself, but he is having much difficulty)
Mark: Dammit, Izzie! Why did you have to get shot? Wait...(he pulls out the bullot) There you are you little sucker! (he throws the bullot into a bowl and continues to operate) Okay, you're doing great Iz, hang in there, your doing great!


(the chief is continuing to do the compressions on Callie, but time is running out.)
Chief: Dammit! She's not repsonding to the meds!
Nurse: Chief, you've been doing this for over an hour...I think we have to let her go...
Chief: NO! We can save her we can!
Nurse: She's gone sir...
(George walks in)
George: What did you just say?
(The chief stops the compressions)
Cheif: George, she's been down for an hour..
George: THAT'S MY WIFE!!! THAT'S MY WIFE! I AM NOT LOSING MY WIFE, I JUST LOST MY DAD! NO! YOU CAN SAVE HER! KEEP TRYING!
Nurse: Chief...
Chief (hesitates): Fine...order another round of drugs and continue with the compressions
Nurse: But...
Chief: Do as I say
Nurse (sighs): Fine, sir.
(The chief looks at george and nods. George runs his hand down his face and nods back)

The end!!


(I'm really sorry this fic ended here. Too bad the writer (Alexandra) stopped.
I was the one who posted them here...
Anyway I have started my own fanfic story about Merder. You can find it on this wiki page.
It's called: Just can't live a lie.
I have chapter 4 up now!! Check it out if you like fanfic...I think this one ends here: (
Tell me what you think about it, and I'll continue on it.)

-Merder4ever



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LoVeMerder keep on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 Oct 17 2007, 8:40 PM EDT by Merder4ever
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oh god you can't stop here alexandra!!!!! please finish this fanfic... it's too beautiful to end like this... and derek? i wanna see what happend to derek!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please just do it for us... fans... friends... lovers of grey's like you... pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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macdog1988 hey 0 Aug 29 2007, 9:35 PM EDT by macdog1988
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OMG new update please!! i need this haha
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ga4life1523 hey 3 Aug 26 2007, 8:18 AM EDT by GreysGirl24
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hey when will there be another update?
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